Do you know who is Joseph Kony? He's a very
cruel man. He is leading the LRA(lord’s Resistance Army). Someone name Jason Russell made a video about
Joseph kony. Because of that video, Kony was famous. Even he is very bad. So, I
agree about Kony being famous. In the world, there’s a so many people who are
famous. Among those people, there’s are popular singing groups,
many presidents, and so many people who did great jobs. One more, there’s an
evil person too. So in my opinion, we should make Joseph Kony famous. Because,
we can tell the world about his terrible plan and poor children. Moreover, if we let the people of the world
know, we can catch Kony more easily. Also
with that work, world can know more about miserable children.
To start with my argument, that we can let the
world know, it’s a fact! Like the video, in the web, no one can stop when it’s
on the internet. Billion and Trillion people watch that video and people know
about Kony. This time, on kony’s website, already 204 country work together.
Joseph Kony isn’t an easy person. He perfectly hides from the world’s eye. With
that children! They capture the young children and make them to kill people.
Even they order them to kill their own parents. I read a book about child
soldiers, and those people treated children very cruely. And Joseph Kony is one
of them!
We should let the world know more about Knoy,
and learn about him. Than we can capture him.
Furthermore, world’s eye is getting bigger and
bigger. We have to capture one person and thousand people are finding him.
Also, a criminal always gets captured. Already people know Kony’s look like and
what he did. We can catch him more easily. If we didn’t know how knoy’s looked
like, and didn’t know what he did, we can’t capture him. He will grew his army
more, and keep doing he’s work. We can catch him if we know more about Kony,
and that will make us easy to capture.
One more, with Kony, we can let the world know
the truth about miserable children. I already said I read a book about child
soldiers. They treated them badly. In the film, Jocob escaped from LRA. But his
brother escaped earlier than Jacob, but he had been found on his escape. So
they chopped off his neck. They treated him badly. More evil is that they gave
them narcotic so tthey slowly turn in to killing robots. At war, they made them
stand in first line so they use as a human shield. Bad, bad people make them to
kill their parents. If they did something wrong, they got killed or chop their
ear or noes. Without this story, people won’t know about child labor or child
soldiers. We have to save them!
With these reasons I strongly believe we have
to make Joseph Kony famous and make it easy to capture him. In our country
Korea, there were many demonstrations against the government and we did it! We
changed our country. Like this we can change the world. We can tell the world
about Joseph Kony’s evil plan and save poor children. We have to make Kony
famous!
This is a good argumentative essay. Remember next time to include the video "Kony 2012" for the reader to see. You also need to address the opposing arguments and rebute them.
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